I second that. It isn't very good to describe things you don't even know yourself. As you said, you only just set up the SDK. Why exactly do we need an "Ubernoob Proof" guide, someone who can't use the normal guides that currently already exist (and search errors on Google) don't deserve to have it set up, it is only going to make them think they are any better because they managed to compile a Hello World sample that was included.
I personally dislike this guide alot because of the lack of gramatics, punctation and organization. Of course, nothing needs to be perfect (I don't write perfect things either), but could you atleast try, as you live in England, I would expect you do know proper grammatics and punctation better then me, as Dutch is my first language.
Everyone who is really serious about this (Raphael, great developer), will probably vote EvilSeph's guide over yours, just like Hardrive's guide is voted over your Pandora guide because of several reasons.